अदर्शनं स्वशिरस: प्रतिरूपे च सत्यपि । असत्यपि द्वितीये च द्वैरूप्यं ज्योतिषां तथा ॥ २८ ॥ छिद्रप्रतीतिश्छायायां प्राणघोषानुपश्रुति: । स्वर्णप्रतीतिर्वृक्षेषु स्वपदानामदर्शनम् ॥ २९ ॥ स्वप्ने प्रेतपरिष्वङ्ग: खरयानं विषादनम् । यायान्नलदमाल्येकस्तैलाभ्यक्तो दिगम्बर: ॥ ३० ॥ अन्यानि चेत्थं भूतानि स्वप्नजागरितानि च । पश्यन् मरणसन्त्रस्तो निद्रां लेभे न चिन्तया ॥ ३१ ॥
adarśanaṁ sva-śirasaḥ
[adarshanam sva-shirasah]
pratirūpe ca saty api
[pratiroope cha saty api]
asaty api dvitīye ca
[asaty api dviteeye cha]
dvai-rūpyaṁ jyotiṣāṁ tathā
[dvai-roopyam jyotishaam tathaa]
chidra-pratītiś chāyāyāṁ
[chidra-prateetish chaayaayaam]
prāṇa-ghoṣānupaśrutiḥ
[praana-ghoshaanupashrutih]
svarṇa-pratītir vṛkṣeṣu
[svarna-prateetir vriksheshu]
sva-padānām adarśanam
[sva-padaanaam adarshanam]
svapne preta-pariṣvaṅgaḥ
[svapne preta-parishvangah]
khara-yānaṁ viṣādanam
[khara-yaanam vishaadanam]
yāyān nalada-māly ekas
[yaayaan nalada-maaly ekas]
tailābhyakto dig-ambaraḥ
[tailaabhyakto dig-ambarah]
anyāni cetthaṁ-bhūtāni
[anyaani chettham-bhootaani]
svapna-jāgaritāni ca
[svapna-jaagaritaani cha]
paśyan maraṇa-santrasto
[pashyan marana-santrasto]
nidrāṁ lebhe na cintayā
[nidraam lebhe na chintayaa]
Word-for-word
adarśanam—the invisibilitysva—of his ownśirasaḥ—headpratirūpe—his reflectionca—andsati—being presentapi—evenasati—there not beingapi—evendvitīye—a cause for duplicationca—anddvai - rūpyam—double imagejyotiṣām—of the heavenly bodiestathā—alsochidra—of a holepratītiḥ—the seeingchāyāyām—in his shadowprāṇa—of his life airghoṣa—of the reverberationanupaśrutiḥ—the failure to hearsvarṇa—of a golden colorpratītiḥ—the perceptionvṛkṣeṣu—on treessva—his ownpadānām—footprintsadarśanam—not seeingsvapne—while asleeppreta—by ghostly spiritspariṣvaṅgaḥ—being embracedkhara—upon a donkeyyānam—travelingviṣa—poisonadanam—swallowingyāyāt—was going aboutnalada—of spikenards, rose-purple flowers native to Indiamālī—wearing a garlandekaḥ—someonetaila—with oilabhyaktaḥ—smeareddik - ambaraḥ—nakedanyāni—other (omens)ca—andittham - bhūtāni—like thesesvapna—while asleepjāgaritāni—while awakeca—alsopaśyan—seeingmaraṇa—of deathsantrastaḥ—terrifiednidrām—sleeplebhe—he could achievena—notcintayā—because of his anxiety .
Blended reading (Sanskrit + English inline)
adarśanaṁ sva-śirasaḥ
adarśanam
the invisibility
sva
of his own
śirasaḥ
head
pratirūpe ca saty api
pratirūpe
his reflection
ca
and
sati
being present
api
even
asaty api dvitīye ca
asati
there not being
api
even
dvitīye
a cause for duplication
ca
and
dvai-rūpyaṁ jyotiṣāṁ tathā
dvai - rūpyam
double image
jyotiṣām
of the heavenly bodies
tathā
also
chidra-pratītiś chāyāyāṁ
chidra
of a hole
pratītiḥ
the seeing
chāyāyām
in his shadow
prāṇa-ghoṣānupaśrutiḥ
prāṇa
of his life air
ghoṣa
of the reverberation
anupaśrutiḥ
the failure to hear
svarṇa-pratītir vṛkṣeṣu
svarṇa
of a golden color
pratītiḥ
the perception
vṛkṣeṣu
on trees
sva-padānām adarśanam
sva
his own
padānām
footprints
adarśanam
not seeing
svapne preta-pariṣvaṅgaḥ
svapne
while asleep
preta
by ghostly spirits
pariṣvaṅgaḥ
being embraced
khara-yānaṁ viṣādanam
khara
upon a donkey
yānam
traveling
viṣa
poison
adanam
swallowing
yāyān nalada-māly ekas
yāyāt
was going about
nalada
of spikenards, rose-purple flowers native to India
mālī
wearing a garland
ekaḥ
someone
tailābhyakto dig-ambaraḥ
taila
with oil
abhyaktaḥ
smeared
dik - ambaraḥ
naked
anyāni cetthaṁ-bhūtāni
anyāni
other (omens)
svapna-jāgaritāni ca
ca
and
ittham - bhūtāni
like these
svapna
while asleep
jāgaritāni
while awake
ca
also
paśyan maraṇa-santrasto
paśyan
seeing
maraṇa
of death
santrastaḥ
terrified
nidrāṁ lebhe na cintayā
nidrām
sleep
lebhe
he could achieve
na
not
cintayā
because of his anxiety .
Important Words
adarśanam—the not-seeing, invisibility
Compound: a (not) + darśana (seeing). The same word that in verse 6 named Kubjā's vision of Kṛṣṇa (darśana) now names Kaṁsa's vision-failure. Gauḍīya: bhakta sees Kṛṣṇa, asura sees his own disappearance — symmetrical inversion.
pratirūpe—in his reflection
Locative of pratirūpa — the counter-form, mirror image. The Bhāgavata's omens are mirror-omens: the self begins to disappear from its own image. Gauḍīya note: the asura's outer success masks an inner non-being already revealed in the mirror.
dvai-rūpyam—double image
From dvi (two) + rūpa (form). The moon and stars double. The Bhāgavata catalogues classical death-omens. Gauḍīya commentary (Sanātana): unity is the sign of being; doubling is the sign of dissolution about to begin.
preta-pariṣvaṅgaḥ—being embraced by ghostly spirits
Compound: preta (departed spirit) + pariṣvaṅga (embrace). In dream the asura is embraced by ghosts. Gauḍīya: bhakta is embraced by Kṛṣṇa, asura by pretas. The contrast structures the canto.
khara-yānam—traveling on a donkey
Compound: khara (donkey) + yāna (vehicle). One of the canonical death-omens. Bhāgavata's catalogue is the same as the Dharmaśāstra omen-lists — the verse is doing technical śāstra inside narrative.
viṣa-adanam—swallowing poison
Compound: viṣa (poison) + adana (eating). In dream he swallows poison. Gauḍīya note: the asura, having spent his life giving poison (cf. Pūtanā), now consumes it in dream — the karma-cycle visible in night-time symbol.
When he looked at his reflection he could not see his head; for no reason the moon and stars appeared double; he saw a hole in his shadow; he could not hear the sound of his life air; trees seemed covered with a golden hue; and he could not see his footprints. He dreamt that he was being embraced by ghosts, riding a donkey and drinking poison, and also that a naked man smeared with oil was passing by wearing a garland of nalada flowers. Seeing these and other such omens both while dreaming and while awake, Kaṁsa was terrified by the prospect of death, and out of anxiety he could not sleep.
Gauḍīya Ācāryas
Viśvanātha Cakravartī Ṭhākura
Gauḍīya
Translation
When he looked at his reflection he could not see his head; for no reason the moon and stars appeared double; he saw a hole in his shadow; he could not hear the sound of his life air; trees seemed covered with a golden hue; and he could not see his footprints. He dreamt that he was being embraced by ghosts, riding a donkey and drinking poison, and also that a naked man smeared with oil was passing by wearing a garland of nalada flowers. Seeing these and other such omens both while dreaming and while awake, Kaṁsa was terrified by the prospect of death, and out of anxiety he could not sleep.
Commentary
The inauspicious omens are explained in three verses. Though he saw his reflection in the mirror, the reflection had no head. The moon and other planets appeared double without objects intervening which could cause that phenomena. There were holes in his shadow. He could not hear his heart beat when he covered his ears. Trees appeared golden in color. He could not see his footprints in the earth and dust. These were omens perceived in waking state. The omens in his dreams were: being embraced by ghosts, riding a donkey, drinking poison, seeing a naked man covered in oil, wearing a garland of java flowers, passing by. In this way he saw many astonishing things both in waking and sleeping states.
Jīva Gosvāmī
Gauḍīya
Commentary
Three verses describe what he saw. He saw double moons and stars in the absence of any obstruction to the eye (such as a finger). Such an omen occurred during the waking state, foreboding death. The word ādi indicates other causes such as eye disease. The word ca is used twice to indicate that he did not see some things and saw other things. This occurred for the other things he saw as well. He saw his shadow with a hole in it. These he saw while awake. Though he stayed awake a long time, sometimes after great worries he would become exhausted and then see dreams. Other things he saw while awake and while dreaming.
Kaṁsa sees his reflection without a head; moon and stars double; a hole in his shadow; cannot hear his life airs; trees golden; no footprints; dreams of riding a donkey south. Inner reality breaks symbolically when outward power is about to fail.
Reflection Questions
What symbolic disturbances in your inner life might be diagnostic, not random?
How do you respond when the body of denial starts visibly to crack?
Analogy
A glass that knows it will break tonight sees its own reflection without a top, hears no echo of its own ring. Kaṁsa's world is being annotated by its coming end — every mirror, shadow, footprint, and tree has been recruited into the chorus of his impending exit. Bhagavān does not need to send messengers; reality itself becomes the messenger.